BIR Advanced Writing 2011
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Friday, June 24, 2011
Wednesday, June 8, 2011
My dream day with Dalai Lama
I don't believe that "GOD" exist. But i believe that "ENERGY" exist. Nowaday, there are many many books being publish, all about Energy.Have you ever seen movie of Secret? I like this movie. i watch this movie twice a month. Secret movie wants to tell to you : acknowledgments, powerful processes, believe your great feeling.
Mentioned above example is concern with Power of Energy.
I try to think about all best things for every other people. If i keep think that everyday, it going to comes true. /you can see one of part from Secret, just don't give up. keep think.../ Isn't it power of energy?
Therefore, if i have free ticket for one day i want to visit Dalai lama's musuem and want to talk Power of energy. Certainly i'll travel around his country with him. It would be unforgettable moment in all my life.
Pearl
Tuesday, June 7, 2011
ticket for 1 day
my ticket for 1 day
An Unforgettable Trip

My friend and I had an unforgettable trip to Las Vegas. We recommended to visit at Las Vegas because you are going to enjoy.
A DREAM IN CUBA
If I have the opportunity to visit a new place, I would go to Cuba. I want to go there because of its symbol of freedom. I read many books about Cuba and especially about Che Guevara..Because i know that if I go there, I can see his history's trace and I want to experience this excitement. I think to witness history is an amazing thing. To witness history mean to live again in that history. But I don't want to go alone there, I want to see there with my friends who have same excitements like mines. When we go there, we must taste famous Cuban cigar. I don't know which foods are famous or traditional in Cuba, but I want to believe that I can find many
delicious Cuban foods and many times I heard that Cuba has the beaches which are famous and very beautiful. Now I'm dreaming myself on the beach with my best friends and very beautiful Latin girls, I should be in paradise:))
One Day In Paris
For the First reason that I choose Paris is I love to see classical architecture and I like the style of buildings. In the morning I will go to visit Palace of Versailles, Eiffel Tower, La Sainte Chapelle, Carnervalet Museum, La Villette science musium and every other famous places if I have time.
My second reason that I like Paris is I love to shopping and as everyone known that Paris is a paradise for shopping . It is the centre of fashion and the city of perfume. In the evening I will go to shopping at the main department stores which located on boulevard Haussmann, 8th avenue, Place des Victoires. There are many fashion names. I would buy everything I want, every perfumes I like.
In the late evening,after be tired for shopping and visiting so many places I will have dinner in a famous and luxury restaurant at L'ambrosie. This place has a very romantic atmosphere. I will try Parisian foods and wines. After that i will spend nightlife time at Moulin Rouge. Moulin Rouge is one of the principal attractions at night. It has a very famous shows. The last thing I would do is taking a walk to see Paris at night time and take a photo because some people say Paris is more beautiful at night because when it dark all the buildings, monuments and streets are illuminated. That why Paris is called the City of Light.
A Free Around Trip

SOCCER IS NOT ONLY A GAME
During this tournament, unfortunately people saw some bad events. In the quarter final of the tournament, GalatasaraySK paired with Leeds United FC which was a team in England. Everything started these games. In England and Turkey, some English and Turkish holigans fighted each other and two people died. After these, all of the people who live in Europe started to follow these events in more carefully,and for these reasons, significance of the cup increased in both of countries.
After these bad events, GalatasaraySK paired with another English team on the final,after they eliminated Leeds United FC in the quarter final. Every bad things started again. The final match was played in Copenhagen in Denmark on 17 May 2000. During last two days Copenhagen streets seemed like a battlefield. After these, this game was not only a soccer game, this was a justness warm for both of the two countries.
Finally Galatasaray SK won the cup, and all people acclaimed success of this team,because an unfamous team accomplished this. People started to be curious about this team. As they wondered what about this,they learned more things abouth Turkey, as they wondered things about Turkey,they wanted to see this country. Turkey didn't win only a cup, Turkey won more popularity. People understood one more time that soccer was not only a game..
My favourite place is Hawaii
Saturday, June 4, 2011
Travel To Khovosgol State in Mongolia
Have you ever seen the reindeer people? Almost commanding people cant to say '' Yes I do''. But I can to say "yes I do". Two taers ago I went to Khovosgol State in Mongolia with my family. We went on the road actually three days.
That road was so hard and long. Because this place is mountain regions and when during on the road was raining, slippery, rising and such a dangerous. Three days after, we were came at one small town. This town was such a closer from Khovosgol Lake. Nature is looks wonderfull. I never seen like that beautiful land. I thougth that time " reindeer people live so wonderful land ". Before, I listened, reindeer people is live in here. Thereupon, I started trying to meet reindeer people when arriving time. Nevertheless, I still didn't meet them almost five days. Well that time i was so said. Because my target was study about rendeer people is lifestyle. For that reason, I went to mountain top with our guide and my two brotehrs. We were so lucky this time. Because we found really easy a small reindeer gens. They were moving another mountain when we got them. Reindeer people is lifestyle really interesting and so traditionaly. They are never use the electric, car, cellphone something like that modern things. They are live in hovel every seasons about winter, summer and ride the caribou, drink the caribou of milk, eat meat, wilding and one type of bread. Reindeer people is so nice and truly.
That trip was so interesting for me. I'll never forgat about reindeer people.
Thursday, June 2, 2011
My Favorite Place is Phuket Island
Last year I went to Phuket Island with my best friend. She is good relationship.
She is a blend of loyalty, love, trust and loads of fun. I like this place because it was beautiful and wonderful. It was very fun and cool trip.
Phuket is South of Thailand .It is the largest and beautiful Island in Thailand.
The weather was nice, blue sky and sunny day. There is the favorite for Thais and foreign tourists. They are so nice and kindness. Many tourists come here because it is wonderful Island.
Phuket is a world famous tourist destination and the reason for that is quite simple-it’s fantastic beaches. crystal blue waters, soft white sand and Phuket beaches is one of top ten popular in the world. Phuket still has a lots of sightseeing or show which famous such as Laem Phromthep ,Phuket Fantasia or Phuket Simon Cabaret Show, Architectures, Old Phuket Town, Old Templeand others. There are many activities such as surfing, scuba diving, snorkel, sunbathe, volleyball and swim.There is a great spot to see the most beautiful sunset and to take a photo for souvenirthat they have been to Phuket Island.
Finally, this place is delightful .I love it. I went to my best friend. I think it was a wonderful day because I was very happy and had fun.I’m very fun and excited. It was the best times of my life.I will remember it forever.
Old friends and new friends.
Wednesday, June 1, 2011
What qualities of a ideal friend.
First, a good friend is honest. Good friends may not be share their everything, but they should share as clearly as they can about their intentions. This mean you know many details about them and you can trust them. If something happen to them, they should tell you. That’s why a good friend need to be honest.
Second, a good friend need to be fun. I bet that nobody wants to have a friend with sad face for whole day. Fun makes people look like more interesting and open-mind. Good fun people can share the happiness when their friends are happy, they can sympathy with their friends when they got sad. That’s why friends need to be fun.
Last, I think a good friend need to support you and your goals. Many people think your goals is not important, but with your friends, they need to take it seriously and support your goals. Ideal friends need to cheer you when you decide to do something and don’t make you feel embarrassing. That’s why your ideal friends need to support you and your goals.
In conclusion, Honest, fun, and support you are qualities that a ideal friends need to have. We try to get that like a measurement to find a best friends. Good Luck!!!
Tuesday, May 31, 2011
My favorite place is Starbucks.
Starbucks have many kinds of coffees. I can try to drinking many kinds of coffee.
Also, Starbucks have good music every time. I'm sitting at starbucks and i enjoy the music. When I'm going to starbucks, I bring the diary, books and laptop. Sometimes i bring some homeworks too. So i can enjoy the my time at Starbucks with delicious coffee. I spend many hours at starbucks with that. Sometimes I go to starbucks with friends. always my friend and i need talk, so we like to go to Starbucks every time.
I love Starbucks. People also can be love starbuck when people know about the starbucks's attractive. Enjoy the life at the starbucks!
Friend's Qualities
Last , I think in our time , it's so difficult to find a good friend who can be always with you , who can understand you , so if you have a good friend you have to do everything to not loose him , and of course you have to be with him too , because your are his friend too .
as conclusion loyal, respectful , a good listener , honest are qualities that a best friend must to have for a good relationship . i hope everyone can have a good friend .
my topic is: my favorite Hawaii place
- wonderful islands
- palm fringed blue lagoons.
- lush rainforests
- hidden garden
- beautiful beaches.
Monday, May 30, 2011
Ordinary home

Where do you live? what do you do? what is your major? etc. A lot of peolple asks that sample question. I like to answer this question. Because i'm sanisfied for my life and my enviroment.
I live in Chicago, i'm start to learning English...
I live in apartment, i like to study english in my little room.
I love my little common room,
I love to study here...
One of my favorite place is definitely my " Ordinary home ".
I think we all have a favorite place in our mind. This place is meaningful place and all the time keep our unforgettable memory.
When i was child i was watch News and read Newspaper a lot. Some of news is happy, some of them horrible. There are many many homeless children's information on the news. When i read or watch this homeless children's news, after that i feel weird, uncomfortable and keep think about them. They are just like me. Why are they sleeping in the street? Where is their parents? What are they eating? Are they have warm clothes? many questions come to my mind. Almost every night before i go to bed i think homeless children, begging to some help them and pray for them. Sometimes i coudn't sleep well. But still i can't help them. I was too young.
Then i thought i always need to compare my life to other children's life.
I'm one of lucky person in the whole world. First of all, I have a large family, dad, mam and sidter. We have a apartment to live, we have a warm clothes to wear, we have a enough food for to eat. We don't have expensive house and house. However, i enjoy being at home for several seasons with my family. Most of the people who visit my house say that they feel comfortable because the atmosphere inside the house is relaxing. It means our family's each member is satisfied for their live. Then we can build that feeling.
Every children when they were little child they were learn everything from their parents and teacher. My thing is, today i'm really adobtable person it's from my parents. Since i have to leave my home i moved more than 7 times. Every that time i can feel comfortable. I can feel one of my favorite place. It is always help my life.
All in all, even though you don't have everything , you can be satisfied with what you have in your home and make your home your Favorite Place.
Pearl
Trip To Las Vegas


